I hope you didn't take my observation about the explosion as a dislike. I found the big explosion quite good. I mean they really need a reason to use torpedoes, they could've also phasered the asteriod if it weren't a bigger danger...
I love the warp-effect, but agree that the tunnel particles should be more blurred.
Your observation was quite correct, I think the smaller explosion works better with this scene. In a further shot I'll destroy something bigger and there I'll use a big boom
Very nice, my one crit would be to move the colored stars on the left a bit more away from the camera. They are flying in my face right now and that kind of wrecks the sense of scale that it seems like they should have. I'd also get rid of the stars at :53-1:00 that move too close to the camera.
Looking at that one, I'd recommend the following:
Put this last scene with the underpass and movie-warpout at the end. It has the feeling of an end, both with the text at the end and the music in general. And at the beginning, you should put a more tactical approach. A passover for instance when it's already at warp or something like that. To underline the urgency of their situation. Alsot he starting music should be more agressive.
Working with the brand new mesh of the U.S.S. Reliant by Raul Mamoru.
Did some retexturing and added lensflares for the lights. A short render shows the Mutara Nebula entry. Maybe I'll make a little TWOK animation with this fabulous mesh
It's looking really good so far. However, one small nitpick. Both ships should already have visible damage on them from round 1 of the fight.
I would like to do something different so my editing tells another version of the mutara battle, in this case there was no first round
But the ships will get some damages in the final fight.
I would like to do something different so my editing tells another version of the mutara battle, in this case there was no first round
But the ships will get some damages in the final fight.
I was gonna point out that the Reliant should be the one following the Enterprise, but that comment just makes me want to see this finished even more!
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I thought I saw some trees in there. It looks good.
Your observation was quite correct, I think the smaller explosion works better with this scene. In a further shot I'll destroy something bigger and there I'll use a big boom
Put this last scene with the underpass and movie-warpout at the end. It has the feeling of an end, both with the text at the end and the music in general. And at the beginning, you should put a more tactical approach. A passover for instance when it's already at warp or something like that. To underline the urgency of their situation. Alsot he starting music should be more agressive.
Minor crit about the warp-out, the ship disappears into the flash while still relatively close, could you make it zip away a bit faster?
Did some retexturing and added lensflares for the lights. A short render shows the Mutara Nebula entry. Maybe I'll make a little TWOK animation with this fabulous mesh
However, as I posted there, I would offset the beacons a bit, so they're not in sync...
As for the nebula, can't wait to see how you tackle it.
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You've got quite a challenge ahead of you!
You've got quite a challenge ahead of you!
Some shots of Take 1-3, it makes a lot of fun to work with the mesh
Very nice.
In my little showcase video of the model, I'd planned to add a few of the initial Reliant shots, but I decided not to do so.
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The layers are multiplied in premiere, the result is not bad.
Youtube is killing the quality a little bit :mad:
Despite that, it looks awesome.
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smooth color gradients is the horror to a high compressed codec, I knew that before I uploaded the file
Even then, YT is still botching the quality...
Awesome!
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I would like to do something different so my editing tells another version of the mutara battle, in this case there was no first round
But the ships will get some damages in the final fight.
I was gonna point out that the Reliant should be the one following the Enterprise, but that comment just makes me want to see this finished even more!
What, and miss the part where Saavik learns "why things work on a starship."