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  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    Updates:

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    Added a load of sensor greebles, more to add on this score.

    And:

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    Protectorate Ranger, Sentinel and Stinger (shuttle).

    Comments welcome, more later :-)
    Lizzy777
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    Updates - added the last of the sensor pallets - total is now eight, and I think enough for an armed explorer:

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    Compared with the Heavy she's not that weapons heavy, only six pulse cannons, no Plasma Lances or Missiles. Total length comes in at 418 meters at the mo. Detail work is ongoing!

    Comments welcome, more tomorrow (possibly).
    StarCruiserLizzy777
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    Managed to sneak in a couple more hours on her:

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    All remaining detail has been built in, just need to texture and light her. That is for another day. Comments always welcome, more some point soon.
    StarCruiserLizzy777
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    Updates - textured, but buggy at the moment, have a few things to fix. Inside of the hanger bay is left to do, and then a proper shuttle, and then... we shall see :-)

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    Comments welcome, more soon!
    StarCruiserLizzy777
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
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    Self-lighting rig needs to be done, and then... This one is complete. I do have an idea for a pod-like shuttle which I will explore a little. Fingers crossed on that score. Comments welcome, more later :-)
    StarCruiserLizzy777
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    New pod-type shuttle, code-named "Fly":

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    Crews two people, max, and is unarmed. A short-range craft, but I can get a couple of these side by side in the hanger:

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    Lighting rig, and then some pretty pics next. Comments welcome, more soon.
    StarCruiserMustang13Camaro68Lizzy777
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • Mustang13Camaro68Mustang13Camaro68351 DetroitPosts: 169Member
    -Love the Fly shuttle!

    -Frigate/Ranger looks like something out of the Last Starfighter universe if they'd ever made more movies.

    -Personally, I think the gun turrets on it seem a bit big. Maybe smallerizing them 10-15% would help suggest that this ship is bigger.

    -I'd also like to see more detail on the engine nozzle thing.

    Regardless, very interesting and unique! I like it.
    Jayru
    MustangCamaro's Other Projects: TaelonMothership MarsAttacks SeaQuestDSV
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    -Love the Fly shuttle!

    -Frigate/Ranger looks like something out of the Last Starfighter universe if they'd ever made more movies.

    -Personally, I think the gun turrets on it seem a bit big. Maybe smallerizing them 10-15% would help suggest that this ship is bigger.

    -I'd also like to see more detail on the engine nozzle thing.

    Regardless, very interesting and unique! I like it.

    Damnit, I keep hitting *flag* rather than *like* - sorry for the mixed message guys. Ignore the flags *sigh*

    The Ranger (Frigate) borrows from a few universes ;-) But mainly from my own mind, there is a change I want to make to it though. More on that tomorrow.

    I'll play around with the turret size, not sure I need to shrink them too much. This is a big ship universe, I don't see fighters being an actual thing to worry about, and I can say that with some authority, lol. I may change the Stinger and remove the guns and rechristen it Dart. I'll think on it.

    More details could be coming... Will think on it
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
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    Mostly finished - added the lighting fx rig, as well as some new detail, fins on the nacelles, and a crossbar to link things up better.

    Not in the same universe, but good for scale comparison:

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    And:
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    Still need to work on the Heavy/Guardian and figure out a way it can carry a couple of the Sentinels. More on that later. Comments very welcome, more soon!
    StarCruiserLizzy777Mustang13Camaro68
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    I think I've cracked how the Sentinel fits in with the Heavy...

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    Needs a few tweaks but the concept is sound.

    Comments welcome, more later :-)
    StarCruiserLizzy777
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    So... This happened. Not sure if I should run with it, or not:

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    It's a major change, but... Not sure. Comments and thoughts welcome. More tomorrow.
    Lizzy777StarCruiser
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • BrandenbergBrandenberg1742 CaliforniaPosts: 1,976Member
    It took me a few minutes to figure out what you changed. Kind of like one of those cartoons where you are supposed to figure out all the differences from another cartoon that looks almost the same.

    I think it is an improvement. Overall, you have so much going on in the ring around the center module that I almost want the center module to be bigger.
    Jayru
  • Mustang13Camaro68Mustang13Camaro68351 DetroitPosts: 169Member
    I like both versions. I will say that the full ring adds more shadows to things below it. Some judicious self lighting could brighten it up so we could see the details.
    Jayru
    MustangCamaro's Other Projects: TaelonMothership MarsAttacks SeaQuestDSV
  • BlueNeumannBlueNeumann656 Posts: 1,299Member
    The full ring is very classical sci-fi ship in a good way. The wings as are might make it look a little too cluttered, maybe if they formed a simpler X or cross shape in the silhouette that might work.
    Jayru
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    It took me a few minutes to figure out what you changed. Kind of like one of those cartoons where you are supposed to figure out all the differences from another cartoon that looks almost the same.

    I think it is an improvement. Overall, you have so much going on in the ring around the center module that I almost want the center module to be bigger.

    Thank you.

    I think that's why it's not quite sitting right with me, it was a happy accident that saw it happen, I arrayed a bit too far, lol

    I like both versions. I will say that the full ring adds more shadows to things below it. Some judicious self lighting could brighten it up so we could see the details.

    Thank you, that's an interesting idea and something to play with.

    The full ring is very classical sci-fi ship in a good way. The wings as are might make it look a little too cluttered, maybe if they formed a simpler X or cross shape in the silhouette that might work.

    Thank you.

    I think... I think the full ring makes it look a little too busy.


    Cheers for the feedback. Having slept on it, I don't think this is the right direction for this type of ship. That being said, it has inspired something which I will share later :-) Feedback from my partner was basic, but to the point - it doesn't fit with the larger ship I built, technically neither does the Sentinel, although all three ships have similar design ethos. I have both versions, I'm going to sit on this for a bit and see what my back brain thinks after a few days.

    BUT, it has inspired something, and I'm going to run with that for a bit. Thank you all again, more on that later :-)
    Mustang13Camaro68
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    Not part of the Protectorate Project... just something that was inspired:

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    Comments and thoughts welcome, more later!
    StarCruiserMustang13Camaro68Lizzy777Brandenberg
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    Updates:

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    I am refining the lines and the design. The current length is 412 meters, with 62 decks. Project name is "Astris"

    More later
    StarCruiserLizzy777Brandenberg
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    More work on the Astris - added some sensor greebles, solar arrays to the outer ring, intake vents to the inner ring, weapons turrets and other misc detail. Still refining and laying things up on this one:

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    Comments and the like welcome, more tomorrow :-D
    StarCruiserMustang13Camaro68Lizzy777Brandenberg
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    Woops! Forgot to add this to the thread:

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    More tomorrow folks, have fun!
    StarCruiserMustang13Camaro68Lizzy777Brandenberg
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    Updates - major details are finally built in. With a few exceptions that will happen organically when I texture her:

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    Comments welcome, more on this later :-)
    StarCruiserLizzy777Brandenberg
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    First pass at texturing - windows still need to be built in at this stage:

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    Comments very welcome, more tomorrow :-)
    StarCruiserLizzy777Mustang13Camaro68Brandenberg
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    Updates on the Astris - windows are now in, few more to add, but it's added the "depth" required. Also redid some of the texture mapping to make it more uniform in size:

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    Still have the hanger to build:

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    And on this one, I have the inside of the "bridge" to do as well:

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    Comments and thoughts welcome, more later.
    Lizzy777StarCruiserBrandenberg
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    First Pass at the Flight Deck, basic set - but I don't think I need something too extensive:

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    Sits quite well, IMOO. Comments welcome, more tomorrow :-)
    Lizzy777StarCruiserMustang13Camaro68Brandenberg
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    Updates - hanger is now done as well:

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    Bug fixes, texture tweaks and some more detail added:

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    Thinking about adding a bit more detail on the back end, but not sure what at the moment. Also I need to put something in that hanger bay. Need to think on that.

    Comments welcome, more later!
    Lizzy777StarCruiserBrandenberg
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    The Astris is now finished:

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    Orthos:

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    It needs a short-range craft, which will be my afternoon project. But the main ship is done and locked :-)

    Comments and the like are welcome, more later :-D
    StarCruiserMustang13Camaro68Brandenberg
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • Mustang13Camaro68Mustang13Camaro68351 DetroitPosts: 169Member
    Astris came out great! Proportions and details are just right. The hexagonal engine pods are great too
    Jayru
    MustangCamaro's Other Projects: TaelonMothership MarsAttacks SeaQuestDSV
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    Astris came out great! Proportions and details are just right. The hexagonal engine pods are great too

    Thank you - this has become a fav of mine.

    Updates - a shuttle/pod type craft:

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    May tweak it some, but the basic concept is right:

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    And it looks good in the bay.

    Comments welcome, more tomorrow :-)
    StarCruiser
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • BlueNeumannBlueNeumann656 Posts: 1,299Member
    I like it, simple shape... I kinda want to call it The Clicker, cause it reminds me of the old remote controls.
    Jayru
  • JayruJayru1368 UKPosts: 759Member
    I like it, simple shape... I kinda want to call it The Clicker, cause it reminds me of the old remote controls.

    Thank you - that sounds like a good idea for a nickname :-D
    The watcher in the tower... Waiting, hour by hour...
    - Mike Oldfield
  • publiusrpubliusr551 Posts: 1,749Member
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