I think the render quality is good as well as the special effects. I think the composition is weak compared to your other pictures in your gallery. The past works you have done have been a real strong compisition with a gripping environment that draws you into the picture. There are a lot of starships in this picture to me that have a cut and pasted feel to it. My 2 favorite battle scenes you have done are "The Battle for Peace" and "Vertical Combat". Those two have very strong compositions.
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What font did you use for the title at the top?
I see 2 ships dying and few other being shot at... badly. All of this in just one camera shot :-)
Also formations are mixed up - looks like both sides caught each other by suprise