the margin at the lower edge seems weird and somehow off but the Connie looks really good. and somehow to me the Fesarius is still one of the strangest shipdesigns i've ever seen.
I would take away the banner and use a simple font white (perhaps with a slight transparancy) Make it smaller than the font size your using there, and place it middle bottom or in one of the bottom corners. Make the title slightly bigger than the credits.
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Hal--what would you suggest as a better way to do text?
Again very nice image!