2DStarside images

[Deleted User]

This is some finished artwork in direct relation to my novel Starside - Future.Family.Fear. I'd like some constructive criticism for the image. I hope you like it, there will be more to come.

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[Deleted User]

A new week, a new image, same character. Didn't have as much time this week so she's a hand-drawn, digitally painted lady with some evolution to her cybernetic body. Any constructive criticism would be welcome.

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spacefighter

there are some nice elements such as the star in the background and the plating on her armour. unfortunately she is clearly a drawing rather than a real human so try improving the image of her face and make it more realistic n lighting.

[Deleted User]

Thanks Spacefighter, I think my lighting and anatomy need some refresher sketching, it's been a while since I tried to do anything serious, clearly it's currently beyond me! Time to study-up I think. Thanks for the feedback.

cavebear

I too like your background and the armoured suit the character is wearing. However in the first picture the face and actually the proportions of the head , ears, eyes, etc do need work. In the second pic the look is far more pleasing while looking more like something you would find in a good anime minus the horribly out-sized eyes those usually have. :thumb:

[Deleted User]

Revamp of the Starside website and art assets has given me a new wallpaper for you to view -



I also added 17,000 words and three characters to the novel along with heavy editing of the original 119,000 words a taster of which can be found on this very site -

http://www.scifi-meshes.com/forums/showthread.php?80107-Starside-Future-Family-Fear-Novel-opening&p=580303#post580303

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated

spacefighter

nice render there, could perhaps do with a bit more randomness and loop shapes to the flares.

[Deleted User]

This is true, I did try and path the particles into loops but they never seemed to work quite as well as I'd hope, in terms of looking as good as I wanted. I'll keep working on it of course, see if I can improve it some more. Thanks for the feedback.

[Deleted User]

There's a new character on the Starside website, any constructive criticism would be helpful.

[Deleted User]

Character WIP based on the previous sketch, she'll be finished tomorrow.

[Deleted User]

Character painting complete... goodnight!

[Deleted User]

A new character sketch, WIP painting will be up tonight.