3DSpace Scene - The Spyder's Web

[Deleted User]

Hey everybody, It's been a really long time but I am back, and still regretting the name, but I will have to live with it Anyway, I return with a scene to share with you, and hopefully get some feedback.

I would appreciate it greatly if you could give me some constructive input on how to make the scene better, as I really think it has potential. Thanks guys

LockeFP

Try brightening the dark part of the ship somewhat. Would make it easier to tell what we're looking at.

[Deleted User]

Ok, no problem, sorry about the light level, sort of made it more atmospheric in my mind, but we all have opinions.

I had a suggestion to make the glowing areas of the ship actually cast light, which somehow I managed to miss. I have attached the new image with contrast and the same image without contrast, hope it helps

Haturod

I dig Nice work! Love the sense of mysyique behind this!

[Deleted User]

thanks

did some more work on this, mainly compositional changes like lighting and small position changes, with some DoF, too. But also did a few small edits the the atatcker ships in the distance.

LockeFP

Hmmm . . . I liked the previous setup better. This one looks a little too cluttered over on the right. The darker shot that you posted above is by far the best of the four you have out here already.