AnimationStar Wars (WIP)

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• evil_genius_1804256 Posts: 11,034Member

  May 2012 #2

  

  The animations are good, but the camera movement on the first video seems a bit jerky and unnatural. You need smoother transitions from stopped to moving, IMO. It's better on the other one.
• akb1979172 Posts: 0Member

  May 2012 #3

  

  OK, I like both videos. A few comments on each...
  
  Video 1

  • I like the "shaky" movement, it reminds me that we're in space and moving. It also reminds me a bit of the reimaged BSG style of filming, which was different and interesting.
  • I like the sound effects of the A-wing's lasers. :thumb:
  • Oooh! TIE Advanced!

  
  Video 2

  • Sound effects of the A-wing's lasers are wrong.
  • The entire crew are admirals? (5 blue and red squares on tunic breast) If you can, that needs changing, but only for correctness/continuity issues.

  
  Overall, very good (I wouldn't know where to start!) and I look forward to watching these progress.
• Randal R0 Posts: 0Member

  May 2012 #4

  Thanks.
  
  well, lol, I only got one Char model that fits, an Imperial Offcr.
  
  And cant spend all the time trying to make a new one, and learn how to cloth him.
  I do not have any other SW Sfx or any other that I like, so I had to use the X Wing fire.
  
  SFX are hard to come by for specifics. Got lots of sound-audio sfx links, and bought effects.
  
  I am still newb. And These videos help me refine my CAM and animation ability.
  ( since I am self learner-)
  
  This is my first-2nd wholly star wars video and do not have much in the way assets for star wars.
  But it will grow the more I make.
  
  may have an update later today with explosion
• Randal R0 Posts: 0Member

  May 2012 #5

  Videos and thread updated.
  
  I wanted to include an explosion in this update. But am having Difficulties in tweaking it and an unforseen problem with Cloners and emitted lights- other than rendering separately, nothing I can do about it.