that's a rather good animation, i like it alot. the lighting is decent, the models detailed(although not truly brilliant designs, but pretty damned good), and the movements fantastic. good to see a space battle where the fighters behave like space ships, what with stopping in mid space, tilting on the spot, etc. also nice effects for weapons( not sure what they are all supposed to be) and engine flames, explosions may not appear quite like that in space and there shouldn't really be sound unless you are listening in on their communication channels but are still good. look forward to seeing more.
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p.s. and i like the background with the planet.
I see a lots of mistakes myself, and will trying to improve them in my future animations.
Cheers!