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AnimationBattlestar- Cylon First Contact ( Short-Fiction-Animation)

Randal RRandal R0 Posts: 0Member
edited March 2012 in Work in Progress #1
I spent a few days trying to make improvements to some of the freebies I have accumulated.

And an idea came. So, here it is.

Though I had ideas for scenes and characters with dialogue to help tell the story, I am not yet capable of
these tasks. Learning as I go.


But I am quickly improving after the Boston vs Aerosmith and some others recently. I thought I would head back and try and make a better BSG than I have previously.

( one of the few problems I am having is adjusting my footage to look decent on tube, every other upload seems
to get Fracked by some compression demon )

Tips, Suggestions Comments are all free. :D


EDITED: This is Final Video.

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  • Randal RRandal R0 Posts: 0Member
    So I Re Shot a lot of the scenes using DOF this time and changing the scale
    some. Also has added footage and more to come.

    See 1st Post Video, it has been updated.


    I think the video has improved some.
  • Randal RRandal R0 Posts: 0Member
    Updated Video: Still more to do. Maybe reshoot some of the opening shots.
  • BuckaroohawkBuckaroohawk2 Posts: 0Member
    There's some good stuff here, and I always love a good Viper vs. Cylon dogfight. The video does seem a bit disjointed, though. The action doesn't always flow the way it should, which makes it a little hard to follow. Of course, many times this was also the case on the original series so perhaps my critique is too nit-picky. I'd call this a good start, but the editing and narrative flow still needs some work.
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